Honestly, I was kind of hard up for ideas on how to bring this story to a conclusion. The main reason I took the break from the story and did the Christmas Special was to give me some time to think up some ideas. Inspiration came from the Beholder's Jung-La in the Naked Junglestory and his more recent Team-In-One fanart, I liked the idea of Kaza and Gwenna having an open relationship and Jung-La being a occasional third partner. From there the idea of a morning after chat about their adventures seemed like the best way to resolve that dangling plot line.
On your DeviantArt page, you mentioned wanting to close up some open plotlines...
When I posted the French translation yesterday [url]>http://les-amis-naturistes.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=193&p=8370#p8370<[/url], I suggested several plotlines that were still unexplored. I'm hoping you would develop some of these in order to prolong this story arc a while longer.
My suggestions are the following...
The shadow on the roof on page 13-catching up
The plotting of Gwen Davis' father and the Trump look-alike on page 03-Daddy Dearest
Why is Skull involved in this story arc?
Finally, I don't know if he's involved in this arc at all but present-day Goofy from the Gwenna origin arc looks menacing enough to explore further. [url]>http://kaza-and-gwenna.thecomicseries.com/comics/205/[/url]
The shadowy character on the roof was Marvolo, the magical guy who showed up the next page. I may not have made that quite clear, but that was my intention.
The story line with Gwen's father and his associates definitely will get resolved in the next couple of pages.
I'd drawn those pages with the Skull that I'd used for the Summer Exchange last year and decided to incorporate them into this story since our villain was associated.
My main idea all along had been the bad guys try to inflict shame on this world as part of a plan to corner the clothing market. How this all works out will get explained shortly.
When I posted the French translation yesterday [url]>http://les-amis-naturistes.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=193&p=8370#p8370<[/url], I suggested several plotlines that were still unexplored. I'm hoping you would develop some of these in order to prolong this story arc a while longer.
My suggestions are the following...
The shadow on the roof on page 13-catching up
The plotting of Gwen Davis' father and the Trump look-alike on page 03-Daddy Dearest
Why is Skull involved in this story arc?
Finally, I don't know if he's involved in this arc at all but present-day Goofy from the Gwenna origin arc looks menacing enough to explore further. [url]>http://kaza-and-gwenna.thecomicseries.com/comics/205/[/url]
The story line with Gwen's father and his associates definitely will get resolved in the next couple of pages.
I'd drawn those pages with the Skull that I'd used for the Summer Exchange last year and decided to incorporate them into this story since our villain was associated.
My main idea all along had been the bad guys try to inflict shame on this world as part of a plan to corner the clothing market. How this all works out will get explained shortly.